We exchanged 'gold spot' drinks.
they cooled our tempers
We had sumptuous sips of hot coffee
They energized our nerves to reach to the top of our hopes
No embraces ,no hugs, exchanged outwardly
but our hearts,minds and souls might have done them in numbers
What are we now in the true to life situations?
keeping apart and unable to know where abouts of each other.
The Love , as every body excitingly say, 'sings'
but the same love just stung us so deep
that the marks it left on our lives are still there, indelible
What have we left behind ,on these sands of time?
A story with a forlorn and ship wrecked theme reflecting our deserted, lovelies
Author notes
Have you ever loved someone so much you didn't care what happened to yourself?
You just had to be with them. If they look at you, your heart stops.
If you feel their breath on your skin, you just ache.
Have you ever craved someone so much you didn't exist anymore?
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A contest entry
- Quote Prompt by Perfectly Imperfect.
300 points, ended April 1, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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I really like this, it's a good take on the prompt, I like your expression
Well done and thank you for entering x
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