On walking down against the boulevard, pondering
Of the latest, fate in totality, wandering
Among this cruel estate of affairs.
The moonshine fades, through shades, a graduation
From the high school, a precipice of attenuation
Did climb among each rung upon the stairs.
Stressing the importance of the loss of Amane
Another God played mortality, among humanity
A great accentuation dares.
A dolls house player Kira the master, discovering
With least discourse, whence beyond, uncovering
This deed to which we fall.
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Oh woe upon this fallen star,
whence the amethyst of appreciations fades.
By which light the lovers are,
Neglected to the morrow's day.
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A time did pass unto the amber hands
The ultimate power, a saviour befallen, lands
Atoning this ground, a precipice royal
Chalky cliffs did hang a loose, so loyal
A torture on his unkempt soil, a riddle one must toil
This plane of which someone must foil.
Yet o'er the rain, breath, howling yonder
These deaths my shoulders held to ponder
Seek the writing, frenzied scribbled, on the walls
Of apples and deities, unwonderment appals.
But a testing flex, as of the wrist, of yore
A hand-hold, ligament, garment, wore.
A simple trick, a telecommunicative device
Did change the telling, death row vice.
May all the proletarians, that day, recall
As once partitioned this production befall
To find our Kira, such rules to which he must adhere
The cockerel driven, trap in which to walk with little fear.
And so to the tale, Investigative agents, we do enlist
The ones that hide their tails, between the mist
The likely subjects, forthwith study to the Light
Enraptured, espying unknown studies we might,
The innocence subsides beyond a measure
'Til once again, to thought, with leisure.
Author notes
Well, I've decided that I'll keep it to this for now. And split this up into different parts.
A dictionary is required to understand this!
This part is an overview of events and circumstances surrounding the series, from the view of a PI looking into the death of Misa Amane.
I *may* add an overview of the subsequent events, as this covers up to the events with L's observations on Light, and the FBI officer that follows him. Or I may leave that to part two!
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Ganze Gut
oh my mofie...one of the best things i've read in days and days! maybe more...the ideas you speak of in your poem are incorporated in your style here and very amusing...i love it. big smile.
*Leah
*ChrisHUGSforinfinity*
p.s.
(what i needed a dictionary for)
precipice: a very steep rock face or cliff; typically a tall one
attenuation: reduce the force, effect or value of
Amane:
proletarians: proles (1984)
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Hehe thaanks!
Amane is the character Misa Amane from the anime series Deathnote!
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This is good so far! I loved how you found such intricate words and even more how you rhymed them. Nice job so far, if you change the title when you finish it I will comment again when it's done!
Hehe thanks for entering my death note fanfiction contest. Good luck 
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Thanks! I will do! Sorry It's taking me such a long time to do it! I need to be in he right frame of mind to do it! But I'm trying! Thanks!!!
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