sweet ambrosial morn
butterflies fill coral skies
mating sinners moan
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Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse." ~ Picture Prompt/ Artist Unknown ~ DEFINITIONS: Coral- Pinks to Reddish Oranges ~ Ambrosial- As spilled nector from the Gods ~ NOTE:
"Corals are a decorative material with a very special fascination - the perfect embodiment of Man's longing for summer, sun and far-off oceans." (Gemstones.com)
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts, all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 45 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Mating sinners moan? I love it!!!!!
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Thank you so much for your Haiku
I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT
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Wow, this is awesome! So vibrant in imagery, linking nature to love... excellent!
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Beautiful and it does exactly what a Haiku should do. It ties mature ti emotion and paints a beautiful image. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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bravo
Neat, nigty, gnarly and an all around well done haiku! I liked it a ton! bravo... bravo.. bravo...
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SEXY
Hello there.
I enjoyed this sexy haiku. I see that you too have followed our host's haiku and used it as a model. It gives us so much freedom in the third line doesn't it?
How many syllables in "ambrosial'? I count 4. amb-ros-i-al. I could be wrong though.
Thanks for sharing your sensual writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a sexy day,
BJ.
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There are only 'THREE' ~ I checked it out here ~ http://www.wordscount.info/hw/syllable.jsp ~~~~ TOOL #1 ~~~ But I thank-you! -
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syllables
What a wonderful THING. THANKS.
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Your words just added to the incredible beauty of the picture!!! Very well done and best of luck
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Gorgeous. :)
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