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Study in Living Color




Topaz suspended
Nightfall's Spring kaleidescope
Thrilling from the view.


Author notes

This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse.

WOW. That was longer than the Haiku.

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  • penman gold member
    April 3, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • InBetweenThoughts
    March 21, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your Haiku I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT


  • N e a r
    March 16, 2008

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    This is beautiful for such short words. The ending is breathtaking. It has a certain tone to it that appeals to me. Great work!


    • Sprite silver member
      March 16, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your terrific comment on my haiku. If I had any stars left I would give you some!

      Joyce