Oh, so I was your favorite?
For a short time you mean...
But then you had me twisted
all up in your strings,
And then you wanted other things.
Got curious, huh?
Thought you'd just go around...
come back and I'd be waiting?
Well that's fucking funny;
Why would I wait for you?
You're used- dirty,
and I just hate to share.
It's really fucked up how I used to care.
But now that I know YOU,
Why did I even dare?
You're like all the others,
and you'll fade easily into the crowd-
A forgotten memory,
if even that.
I just hope you know you've
really lost someone grand.
This someone would have
given all for you, for you...
And now there's someone else out there
that deserves my attention,
my love...
And I'm just pained I've
had to keep HIM waiting so long.
But I'll make his waiting worth it;
loving you was worthless.
It's so funny now,
how you ask me for other chances...
And I don't have the time of day.
You think you've left me broken-hearted,
but "FUCK YOU," I want to say.
"I never loved you anyway."
Author notes
I chose numero DEUX!! YaaaaaaY for angry lines lol...
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Comments
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AWSOME
Great poem but when I read things like this it brings sadness, To live out the inspiration for such a poem never seems worth the pain..All good things to you G-E-Sabi
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^^ amazing poem! Really shows the raw emotions and how the heart can be fooled and tricked before it finally realises the difference between the want to not be alone and actual love.
Very awesome!
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wow. intense. I was amazed by this part
Oh, so I was your favorite?
For a short time you mean...
But then you had me twisted
all up in your strings,
And then you wanted other things.
stunning -
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