some just hide and try to be
alone in the dark not a soul in sight
and when i get a glipse of it
trapped some where between
falling down in to the depths of dispare
it cannot be seen
after fighting so hard to stay
then i logged on
out of the blue
where disney was my life
i was the same person inside
standing here infront of her
for as i lay me down to rest
protect my child
raised in a christian society
you were really gone
A contest entry
- The Magic of THREE! Stealing the third line from your own poems to build a new poem! by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 16, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh, I am weak from reading your sparky poem...
Laughing and admiring and thinking the Disney line is purely genius! This poem is a true indication of your brilliant future as a poet.
If you ever want to sound magnificent, just follow the Magic of Three and see where it takes you. 
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BTW
I hope you win
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very complex...
I keep reading your words line by line, over and over, you are simply brilliant!
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