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Searching all my life, seeking


Was an accident, really.
Wearing fluro coloured furry slippers
Cold buttered toast with vegemite
Sinful pleasures of naked flesh games
I am standing
Of mothers love.
Busy  working for a dollar
Misshapen individual
Unseen, unheard
Sails set to catch the wind as it breathes
Loving arms.
For any more.
Come,
He watches over me yet he is not near
Individual
Associated black magic number…..



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  • Roaddog Wolf
    July 25, 2008

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    I like the phots with this one and

    kind of looks like an egg-roll to me lmbogang of eggs, egg-roll , get it lol, sorry was a good poem lol made me lol the photo that is


  • penman gold member
    March 28, 2008
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    Excellent

    What a great take on the picture. So very funny. Best of luck in the contest.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    LMFAO!! Oh my goodness that pic and this writing that defines it so well!! Lordy my good bad girl you make me laugh!


  • Robin Candor
    March 18, 2008

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    This concept is something I had not thought of. You handled it very well. I am wondering if I would have chosen to play at all. I will now have to review a few things to see if this could realistically make sense. Silly me, of course it makes sense. You would not be here if it didn't. I enjoyed it, but also know that only true Beatle fans would try to search out the third lines in your works. Groupies only need apply. RC


  • James R
    March 18, 2008
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    Beautiful write and well thought out my friend, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

  • penman gold member
    March 17, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wow, terrific creation. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • robert bolin
    March 17, 2008

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    I love the contrast of power that the heart holds
    It's a candle it's an eternal flame and it's love
    It's vivid it's magic and it's the human will that drives beauty into the beholders eyes,
    Very powerful and just an awe for all poets in every form of life...


  • rustynite silver member
    March 16, 2008
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    By Golly this almost makes sense. Scary in a Calvin sort of way. smile. Loved it. smile.


  • Melodies
    March 16, 2008

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    A poem by any other name is still a poem...

    AND THIS POEM is exactly a POEM of excellence! Your wonderful talent has re-invented itself and comes out like OH MY GOSH FINE! The picture is perfect, too. OH you are so smart, even all mixed up. +++

  • June-bug
    March 16, 2008

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    Very good Mook...Love the graphics...had a weak like the bottom on last week only instead of yelling OH NO! I was yelling When does it end!!!! Any way enjoyed and am leaving with a best wishes in the contest.

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