that will recover your heart.
your smell fading in the wind
Kisses filled with poison,
in circles you go
broken fragments of hatred condemn you
kisses tickling my heart.
Never will you stand alone again
blood stains the walls today.
calling our names,
ever get out alive......
roads of hell and heaven.
Sweating out my hatred, choking
losing....
dreams crashing
burying your self pity,
making a path for you to walk.
Author notes
This will not make sense but check out the contest and it will!
This was super fun!
A contest entry
- The Magic of THREE! Stealing the third line from your own poems to build a new poem! by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 16, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Best of luck in my contest..
This is just the first time looking at all
the poems in my contest .. please do not respond.
Riftkin
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Well, do you have any idea... really...
HOW VERY VERY VERY BRILLIANT THIS POEM IS??? +++ Sincerely, it is.
It is possibly the best poem you ever wrote and I am saying that with complete confidence because when we write poems and then combine the wonderfulness of them, we achieve true beauty. 
You did that, here. 
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thank you very much this was a very unique type of contest and I think i may even have learned something new about writing poetry
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Actually, I thought this kind of made sense as a poem.
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reading over and over i do have to agree so thank you
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Its very...abstract. Wits actually pretty good. theres definatly imagry there. Its not bad! I like it
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glad you liked it it was a fun contest
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