or would you just leave me hangin?
Worked my way up to the top to pay up all mt bail.
making even 7 footers seem itty-bitty
I know you only do it
i dont have to make a move to make U move
outside
to go back and make revisions
now im in a postition
of what the future holds for me...
this time i'll lean more toward perfection
im sorry for its suppression
to connect with you in every possible way
ridiculous it may seem
but my brain beginning to strain is something im not up for
maybe its because of everything we went through
out of all the others you could have had
Author notes
plss dnt try to make any sense of this....its not supposed to make sence((read the contest prompt))
A contest entry
- The Magic of THREE! Stealing the third line from your own poems to build a new poem! by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 16, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me wat u think
Comments
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has a nice trend to it
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Very appealing madness...
I like this poem very much because it is like speaking to an alien and getting random answers that sound very smart but make no sense.
I LOVE IT! 
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