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the storm rolls in
fights the current of emotions
words fished and caught
time stilled
breathe fastens
night dawns
day awaits dusk
the time for healing reverses
agony accelerates
love evaporates
hate seeps
mind lost
confusion gained
witnesses lie
enemies hold truth

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  • Swords in Ice
    March 17, 2008
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    Smugness

    I wrote one line ^_^

    Nice stuff, it works very well as a thinking device.

    Good work hun