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Beauty of this dawn { Gold }

Missing image

Blissful moments abounding

ecstasy upon the folds of  love

Highlighting scenes of nightfall remembered

Lovers entwine

Passionate twists

wind to the treads of beading lust

interlace we were one

Sensual strokes caressing

silk-ed wrapped softened skin

Dance bare

Heat generated threw back sheets

Electric sparks fired

 to our orgasm

blew our fuses

Waking lovers

to the views of beauty

Lay to the stillness of time

Cradling waves lap against the shores

Hush filled our minds 

To which our love making 

began again

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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{ Picture Prompt } Lovers Dream
Artist Unknown

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  • drhemantvinze
    July 14
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    Reptile Lady

    This indeed is "Heavenly Bliss"
    Hemant Vinze


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    Wow; you sure have mastered this genre of poem writing. Sensuality is definately yours to own & claim. I am jealous now but glad to have read some of your sensual writes because it gives me so much more inspiration & new ideas!

    This was so beautifully penned and full of elegance.. love making described & done with class.

    Amazing write & congrats on the gold won-- well deserved


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    great piece!

    you're definately in the finalists list with this one...

    good luck from there!

    thanks for entering!

    mike, aka jonathan wikkins


  • Ithica silver member
    April 6, 2008

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    I can see why this one wears the Gold!!! You took me back to places I dare to remember... slashed the curtain open with your pen, and re-opened up my view... (the ex and I had a view like this of Mt. Hood from our bedroom, sigh)


  • sweetgirlwa
    March 21, 2008

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    This was fantastic!!! You took the reader to that place and left them there to absorbe the beauty of the moment. You have a talent with the expression here. Wonderful take on the prompt. Congrats on the gold!

  • imahealer
    March 20, 2008

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    Hey, girlfriend, Congratulations on the gold. Pretty soon you are going to need a separate page for all of your trophies! Your metaphors and imagery were just so stunningly sensual. I knew when I read this, is had gold written all over it! I must admit to one little chuckle. I'm slowly reading along, taking in all of the imagery, which is slowly building to a climax, and I read "blew our fuses"! Why I found that funny---chalk it up to a horny woman who ain't gettin' nuttin'.
    Love you!

    Shana


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      March 20, 2008
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      Well I can dream can't I.... and who knows
      Memories never fade when its that good
      xx


  • Entwining Beauty
    March 20, 2008

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    tenderly written poem such of lovin going on within the picture you paint with words simply breath taking


  • penman gold member
    March 17, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very sensuous and well expressed. So very well done. best of luck in the contest.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    March 17, 2008
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    AWESOME WRITE THIS IS

    I had to wipe the seat off my brow on this one you penned this very well


  • daviscth
    March 17, 2008

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    This is wonderfully done sweetie. Thanks so much for the link. Best of luck in the contest you posted in.


  • Abe 1
    March 17, 2008

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    1 sexy muma
    u r an artist in dis field of writing
    mind blowin dats 4 sure
    amazin & wish ya luck
    abe

  • Bob Fox
    March 17, 2008

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    Oh those sparks

    Let me say first...I love the graphics lol. What a wonderful shot. And then the words of passion can make a man pack his bags and move on to Eden, that garden of love


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 17, 2008

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    Another sensual piece with beautiful verse & Structure-
    Exv=cellent take on the prompt and good luck in the contest!

    • Reptile Lady gold member
      March 20, 2008
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      Thank you hun
      Cannot seem to help myself the words just flow x

  • Nighttime angel
    March 17, 2008

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    Mum,
    this is a very beautiful & sensual write. I truly enjoyed reading this. its absolutely wonderful.. excellent job

    good luck in the contest

    kat

    • Reptile Lady gold member
      March 20, 2008
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      Thanks Kat
      Sensual seems to become my strong point in poetry
      xx


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 17, 2008

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    Julie that was wonderful. Stunning creative writing here. I loved this. Superb indeed. It was sensual and carried the reader along with it.

    Amazing writing.
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • maralisa silver member
    March 17, 2008
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    this is a stunning take on the picture julie good luck in the contest x marina


  • N e a r
    March 17, 2008

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    This is beautiful... and the tone is marvelous, definitely something to read when relaxing or just sitting down, having a nice cup of coffee in the morning.
    Wonderful. Good luck!


  • aboomer silver member
    March 17, 2008

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    Oh, this is very nice. Soft and sensual without saying too much - leaves more to the imagination that way and I feel is much more effective.
    I love the line
    'blew our fuses' - powerful.
    Well done!
    best wishes in your contest.


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      March 20, 2008
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      Thank you
      The prompt came up and my words sprung into action
      and what a place to be hey x

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