Endurance insisted
bustling hearts
remain
mine
forever
[but ownership has no locks]
pushing opposition
we came
we tried
we failed
persistence showed no interest
when your glued to someone else.
Author notes
30words
prompt:9. Stick to it like glue
pic credit:By photojenni on Flickr
A contest entry
- Cliche's - 2 by Unsigned.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tempt My Heart - PW by Melissa Burns.
600 points, ended March 22, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Painful Side Of Love by Blooming Poet.
575 points, ended March 28, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wonderful take and well deserved recognition. Congratulations on Bronze!
Ken
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Excellent take on the prompt. A well written, meaningful poem. Congratulations on your trophy.
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My heart is breaking just reading this. The pain is so intense. I love the picture too. My fav part is this:
Endurance insisted
bustling hearts
remain
mine
forever
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we came we tried we failed
Indeed my friend! LOVING this title! Thanks for entering I enjoyed the read
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Wow....very very good....I enjoyed this so much...your words are so very true..
Thanks and good luck
Simon -
Excellent
Your view on this prompt created a excellent poicture in mind especially "we came we tried we failed persisitence showed no intereat". Good Luck in the contest. Take care, Michele
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Another perfect poem, i really like then ya know, i'm serious
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