I once strolled down paths of grace
where even time had slowed its pace
breezes flowed with reverent care
peace trod softly upon the air
Contented leaves let out a sigh
from gnarled giants that towered high
yet lay mirrored in silent pools
where fishes swam in languid schools
To sturdy trunks great creepers clung
on mossy boughs thick vines were strung
and 'tween grassy blades bloomed
wildflowers spun on nature's loom
The sun too had muted its might
and spread its rays as filtered light
through branches that joyfully swayed
showering trails with dappled shade
Ponds shimmered with bright golden gleams
ballrooms of happy, waltzing beams
while arias sung by wren and thrush
echoed from verdant hedge and brush
the evening choir's honeyed tones
could melt the heart of hardest stone
while the setting sun's mellow kiss
filled mind and soul with warmth and bliss
Now late into this still dark night
once more I yearn for that treasured sight.
A contest entry
- In Cathedrals of the Forest...A 24hr Theme of Solitude & Grace by Blue Rew.
897 points, ended March 22, 2008, 8 entries
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Supreme!!
What a superb write! What a splendid journey you have led me with your fantastic words... I enjoyed every word and did not stop for breath until the end..... breathtaking!!...ian.
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Beautiful descriptions, capturing the sense of timelessness in the woods. Lovely background is perfect compliment to your write. Very nice rhyming. Loved your "languid schools" and "wildflowers spun on nature's loom." Charming "arias sung by wren and thrush."
Delightful trail walk with you as guide and narrator.
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This is enchanting and relevant...
such a magnificent display of nature's ability
to bring peace with her beauty. I felt the flow
and rhyme were flawless. A perfect fit to theme!
Blue
PS-There's an extra 'r' in mirrored -
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thanks for catching the r its gone now
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My Dear Pari,
The serenity and grace of these words sets my mood for the day. You have whisked me away to a place of paradise. I love the way this poem flows effortlessly, like a gentle waterfall, streaming into my spirit and cleansing my soul. SIGH
I am at peace with the world even in the turmoil that seems to always abound. I thank you for this my dear sister. Brilliant work! You have painted a wondrous portrait of the world in all its splendor and beauty. This poem is truly a work of art. It is lovely!
All My LOVE ♥
Renee
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Amazing!
This is such a beautiful piece of poetry! I especially love the third stanza. You have touched on all that is exquisite in nature with this piece. The background marries so very well with your words, well done, this was well worth the visit.
Katie
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