Aware

Changing tides,
landmasses shifting.
My life, shimmering in this new Sun.

Moonshine offers
exciting opportunities;
my spirit, basking in Her glow.

My heart, wrapped in ethereal
gratitude's gauze. . .

awakens.

A contest entry

Magic in words #1 by phoenixonfire. 300 points, ended March 17, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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phoenixonfire
March 17, 2008

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Great words and nicely placed! there is sense of hope in the end that brings it to a nice sweet end!!

thanks

pri
- johnh94
  March 17, 2008
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  Thanks so much my little Pri! You are growing into a beautiful woman! Sorry I haven't been around of late, but have struggled this past year with health issues and just now getting back to feeling my "self." be well dear poet, you are amazing!
Sandra R Reynolds
March 16, 2008
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Good write and imagery
- johnh94
  March 17, 2008
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  Thank you so much for your kind words and applause!