Yes, you've cut it down I see? Here we go, another rant
You know we used to love it so But that was then, and this is now
But now the little tree can't grow! It wouldn't have grown anyhow
That tree was supposed to mean... ...That we would always keep in touch
When the future was unseen We'd have memoirs, at least that much
But now you've gone and cut it down! Well what do you want me to say?
Maybe I should leave this town The tree didn't work anyway.
Well, what do you mean by that? This is our first call this year
... Now you see what I mean here.
You know how busy I've been. This was the thing we dreaded most...
...That a huge gap would begin And that is what I've diagnosed
It'll just decay, that little tree I think it's served its purpose now
We need it more now, don't you see? It doesn't matter anyhow
...I think that I love you Oh spare me please, that isn't true
Yes it is! Don't drop the phone Too late. You left me all alone
Wait! I did.
Five minutes more! Or five more years?
Goodbye.
Author notes
Okay, so it didn't really fit the contest. And it didn't come out as well as I hoped it would. Anyway,
The way this is supposed to be read is from the first line of the first column to the first line of the second column, like a conversation. (The first column being the first person, the second column the second person.)
I stole the idea from recklesspoo ^-^ Hope you like!
I'll fix the spacing later.
A contest entry
- Here's something interesting. by celestial.
300 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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This was so creative. I like the idea. Thanks for sharing.
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At first I thought this was a self converstation - like Gollum. Either way its a very good poem. Probably not your best but amazing all the same.


