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Shadow


Shadow
an expression
of myself
Silent
always with me
it never speaks
Peace
in my reflection
I cast forward
Deep
in the shadows
of my mind
Forgotten
is the image
I left behind

A contest entry

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    Wonderful shadow. I loved the strong words Shadow, Silent, Peach, Deep, Forgotten.

    All pieces and parcels of solitude and its implied bliss. A nice entry to my contest dear poet. Thank you and best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Rose Cold Murder
    March 16, 2008
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    nice

    good write...
    ROse cold murder