When I say that I miss you so
You honestly don't understand
So I just wanted you to know
I'm here to show you, take my hand
I miss feeling so completed
I miss having you here with me
I miss knowing that you would stay
Every little thing counts you see
I miss looking into your eyes
I miss knowing you're looking back
I miss the way you know I know
I miss the jokes you'd always crack
I miss the freckles on your nose
I miss the sweet smell of your hair
I miss your little half smile
That I can hardly tell is there
So in short, yes, I do miss you
But I don't think you really knew
All the things I meant I missed
When I said that I missed you.
Author notes
Option 2
A contest entry
- Cross My Heart Hope You Die (QUICKIE) by Fey Absinthe.
550 points, ended March 16, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Missing Me, Missing You by ms-cuddles.
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Comments
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So Liking This
Funny how many things we mean when we say I Miss You and one never really knows all unless we tell them. This was so sweet, just made me smile and think of a simpler time. Thanks for entering and good luck. Hugs~ Cuddles -
Wow I really like this
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I LOVE YOU FOR THIS WRITE!!!!
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