Do you want to hold me, darling?
My darkest black and milky white?
Do you think of me before you sleep?
Will you dream of me tonight?
A flower in the dark
Will curve it’s petals to the light
Each simple movement brings me
Only closer to the night
I will lay in pools of glory
As I hold my trophy high
My flag will sail above the others
For each victory denied
I keep my lovers crying
I bury each lie and tear
We do not understand the problem
Yet the answer is so clear
A contest entry
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550 points, ended March 23, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Very good job my friend!
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Beautifully written here, so emotional and raw... I want him to hold me...my love, that is. This is nicely don.


