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Celebration

at night

as the breath of lulled voices
drift into veiled sleep
turning the tired day
into filtered dreams

the throbbing mortal heart
which lies suspended
is resurrected:
dancing the Golden Waltz
with eternal wings

myra

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Written February 10th, 2002

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  • September 7, 2002
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    neutral

    short and beautiful myra!

    (like always) :)


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Thanks for visiting Yolanda!

  • yolanda
    February 10, 2002
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    Eternal wings....aaaaahhhhhh - loved it.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Thank you gecko ... wow, this one was not that bad, hey? *SMILEZ*


  • gecko
    February 10, 2002
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    a sweet soft lilt with wonderful tones of happiness and hope.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Thanks nell! Thank you aiwaz ... what beautiful compliment!

  • aiwaz
    February 10, 2002
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    i really love yr work, yr simplicity will always charm me but the depth of yr images keeps me coming back for more...i read you in small portions and savour you like wine on my tongue


  • nell
    February 10, 2002
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    this is nice
    well written
    i enjoyed!

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