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Last Man

Why does it seem,
so hard to think these days
I feel like I am falling
Down a tunnel that has no end.
All these nightmares
that I see inside
Always scream at me
from the crevises in my mind
I cant cry anymore
without seeing tears
and the only crying said and done
is the one I see inside.
I wish I could just say,
I had not a care in the world
But then, I should be as untruthful
as the last man was.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 7, 2008
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    I often feel haunted by things like this as well, sometimes the world phases us too much.


  • whits end silver member
    May 30, 2008

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    Cool. You don't want to be him, damnit!! A good write, and it sounds like you got your feelings out!


  • xPink-Lotusx
    March 16, 2008
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    Oooh, I like this!

    Well done. I like how it forms a dream like imagery in my mind. Good job!