we've sailed our ship for bounty, across the seven seas
we searched across the milky way and several galaxies,
then we found a planet far away amongst the stars,
that is where you'll find us, pirates trying to eat mars.
Author notes
milky way, galaxy, mars bars mmmmmmmmm
i am in heaven now,
I have roast pork wafting fragrantly through the house and chocolate in my head lol, oh and it's sunday
wonder if there's a film on lol
A contest entry
- Group Contest... Chocolate Eating Peg-Leg Pirates only by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 21, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thats brilliant so very funny and very clever, hugs LIb x x
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I used to be addicted to mars bars until i made myself sick
This is very cute Good luck in the contest 
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what a cool trip...a science fiction trek to gluttony...very well done.
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A brilliantly penned four lines of chocolate and pirate delight! There should be a candy bar called, "Treasure Bar." Is there?
I am delighted to get your delicious poem in our contest. 
Thank you for coming in! 
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ah all those chocolate bars are sending a ripple down my curly wurly
i think i need a finger of fudge to calm myself down
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