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Fat ballad


Calorie, My Count
Oh! Calorie my count
you own me,
twist me.
In a blink, I flare my fangs
In other lie cowering at your feet.
I count every and every
Oh every Little Calorie.
My Count ! you leave me weary
I lie heart beating ,eyes teary.


Author notes

its not a new poem,i entered it as new coz i cudnt gt it thru d pre wrtn ones.rite now i really watch evrythng i eat,it feels cruel,thus this poem.

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 19, 2008

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    A unique composition---well written and I like the title "Fat Ballad"
    Well Done--
    --Best of luck in the contest!