It was the first time I saw the sun
so contained, crawling on the walls
of painful morn, a standing shadow
stood over the morns bustled with
soft dreamy beams of light while
sleepy lads lay sombre and passive.
Mornings filled my anticipation,
a time when the hushes of sleepy
dawn peered into my sleepy world
I’d speak only if called upon, so
I’d sit quiet in the teachings while
the morning sun of pep crept high,
dancing tepidness with beams that
came through the panes of learning
crawling amber hues on the walls.
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I may have a new definition for abstract after reading this- that which needs to be unraveled...! also, I see it can be used to draw out emotions whit only the vaguest of references...
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aye to watch the sun paint the sky is a great experience at times, and the first time to see it in a different light is always good
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As you know art began on walls . . .
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