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Up In Smoke

Flames blazing
like a hungry monster.
Engulfing all in sight.
Precious family memories
utterly destroyed.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 16, 2008

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    Liked your interpretation of the picture served to inspire writers in this contest. Certainly makes sense. Nice to be able to reuse it again too.

  • Nighttime angel
    March 16, 2008
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    WOW. your words paint a dark & eerie picture.. you did an outstanding job with this and with the prompt. thank you for placing this into my contest. this deserved a trophy, and I am truly sorry that I didn't get to view this before now.

    thank you for entering & good luck

    kat

  • Nighttime angel
    March 16, 2008
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    the prompt is up