Persian green eyes
hidden, teasing,
furtively withholding
your glimmer of passion.
Only one course of action:
To gently part
curtain of silken lava,
inhaling beauty
as lips caress your neck.
Author notes
I'm not a gold member so I cannot put the picture prompt with my piece, to see, click the link:
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2395/585.jpg?1205416439
A follow-on piece from 'Fire Rain'. More thoughts, not so much on the one that got away, so to speak, but on the one that was never caught. (if that makes any sense)
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A contest entry
- Invite Only for the following people: by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended March 19, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ENTER ANYTHING. by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended June 9, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This stuning, truly.
Wonderful poem!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Soft and sensually seductive. Very well written. Best to you in the contest.
Mouser
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Thank you very much. Very much a dream now, the memory of her....that's why the picture prompt struck such a resonance with me, as now so many years on, I have difficulty remembering her face.
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Very hot stuff here...I love it!
. But you know me, I love anything that is euthenistic, flirtatious, dirty or outride crude haha 
. Lovin' it. x
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Thank you. You like that kind of stuff? lol
As for this piece, now, if I had only ever been in her league or had actually done that which I mused upon...
Ah well, as I said elsewhere, first crushes are just the worst.
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