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Shatter


Once we loved,
it was a happy time,
a time of light.

Now I am in darkness,
soul, state and mind.
Since that day...
the day of shattering.

I will fix you,
Sewing, sewing...
can't loose you...
not now.

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  • Exodus gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Very abstract take on the prompt, the idea of stitching someone back together certainly produces some interesting mental imagery Thank you