As sun sets on another day
my thought wander to this day gone by,
have I made a difference today
or is it just imagination.
Calm seas reflect in ideal hue
a picture perfect world we crave,
envisage peace throughout the planet
in sighs for what we hold so dear.
Breathing in this beauteous sight
I feel a surge of hope escape,
creation's pose in glorious splendour
as I conceive a world so fine.
I dream of harmony with all creation
as I view this miracle before me,
mankind in tune with nature
as trust is mutual.
Author notes
Picture prompt title 'Imagine'
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration - Imagine by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended April 11, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yeah, wouldn't that be wonderful. Humanity taking the time to really get to know nature.
Great job on this poem, it is deep and meaningful. Good luck and thanks for entering!
~Cj
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A beautiful poem and how that would be so perfect if humanity could find such a harmony that would bring peace among the world once and for all Good luck in the contest Brian.
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Beautiful words and stunning imagery go hand in hand with the lovely calm picture. It surely would be nice to live in a picture perfect world, I'm afraid this is not so....but what is perfect is this wonderful piece of work you have penned so beautifully. Well done sis and good luck in the contest. excellent!
Love ya loads
Shaz xx
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oh this made me sigh. the imagery within this piece speaks so much and I loved the depth and imagerywithin this well done gran
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