Looking up at the nights sky
I saw the most amazing shooting star
a while back and I wished to find someone to make me happy
crazy enough it happened my wish came true
When Im with him I feel so amazing its like hes half man half amazing
All the moments we share together are pretty interesting but none too bad we cant handle together I especially like it when he kisses me leaving me with goosebumps all over my body
My heart trusts him with my life and I care about him I just hope that he trusts me with his. Having his heart makes me happy and glad I made such a great wish and I found what I was looking for
Hopefully I wont have to make any new wishes..
What did you think
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could've been better. no offense or anything but to me it didn't come straight from ur heart i felt no emotion in it at all like poems should have. but work on it a little bit and see whats gonna happen hope it works out for u.
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It all depends upon how controling you would be in the relationship how bossy and how hard you are to handle when you get an atttitude once he experiences any of those and oh so many other minor flaws or things that would tick him off then he'd probably never give you his heart BUY I was not being mean intentionally I was merely pointing out a few things that should be worked upon to create a sustaining relationhip. another good ida would be to build a friendhsip that leads into love and a true relationship ect. just an idea. not a half bad poem though keep up the good work
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