Sinking into you.
Touching a tenderness
I never knew existed.
Open, trusting
where ever you take me,
I'll go with no resistance.
Safe, protected
I share saturated day dreams.
Beautiful Eden,
painted pictures of intimate connections.
An interlude for you and I.
Audrey Evans
3/13/2008
A contest entry
- Weave for me the intensely unique wonders of your first Love. by artis.
475 points, ended May 1, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
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Great. Short and swheet. But you made your point. All your poems are great. i like thems all. my favorite part is this would be "Safe, protected I share saturated day dreams." Great. I could picture everything as i read. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly -
Thank you for sharing my grief. I like the picture of Eden and the beauty it contains. I hope he may have found peace.
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hmm... this really wasn't what I was looking for. Sorry... Still, if you would put the option # in the notes. thanks
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Thanks for entering this contest... I really like it. I am sure Brenda will appreciate your words of comfort.
Best of luck in this contest!
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. it is wonderful when you can trust someone like you have explained in your well written poem.
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Very nice work
very well written and heart felt
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"Who ever wrote this poem "you did a nice job"
thanks for entering...
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RE: How.
Helllo. I wrote the poem "How". Thank you for your nice words and support.
Audrey Evans
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mmmm, the first time, like Eve tasting the forbidden fruit, now offered with loving to Pluck, and all the beauty that surrounds it in the garden of passion growing, such an interlude in our chaotic lives to bind together, and melt away from all of the
stress and then bask in the sweet sighs of the afterglow...great write~~Thanks for your entry~~Artis
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