Oh my love
I do comply that despite my own label
I am not vanquished by my own envision
neither I am aligned with my own material
nor my own traditions driven me
auspiciously or inauspiciously
I am bracketed with you by a floss of amorousness
which is though not seen by the naked eyes
but it has dovetailed as effervescent forever
by mashing of our two symbols into the one
Oh my love...
Author notes
Prompt...
Have you ever loved someone so much you didn't care what happened to yourself?
You just had to be with them. If they look at you, your heart stops.
If you feel their breath on your skin, you just ache.
Have you ever craved someone so much you didn't exist anymore
A contest entry
- Quote Prompt by Perfectly Imperfect.
300 points, ended April 1, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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We seem to both be romantics
Romantic love is the icing on the cake. With the right ingredients we form a recipe for sweetness. May your piece of cake be a satisfying one.
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This is a beautiful piece of love and I thank you for entering Well done x
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Your words resonate love through and through. Your last line "by mashing of our two symbols into the one" was an eloquent way of describing the union of the male and female to create that raw emotion of Love!!!Well done, best of luck in the contest...
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Interesting take on the invisible connections between people. Good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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Wonderful Job.like the depth given to this write by your word choice.
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Prahbudayal This line especially is just stellar, wonderfully expressive!:
"...it has dovetailed as effervescent forever..."
Great writing my friend.
Paul
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A beautifully done piece. I love the inner reflection going on there. I think we often need to do this in order to maintain the balance of self and our spiritual aspirations. Lovely job.
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