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Now What Do I Do

You were the one who asked

  You were the one who wouldn't stop

I tried to show I didn't care

  Now what do I do?

 

You said "Hi" to me

  You were the one who

Just couldn't let it be

  Now what do I do?

 

Life is real

  Never was a game

Now you are gone

  Now what do I do?

 

You wanted everything

  Up to the end

Then you decided You didn't want me.

  No what do I do?

3-16-2008

A contest entry

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  • yourguardianangel
    March 21, 2008
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    Never be afraid to just get out of control and completely let go..this is good but you haven't quite reached that level of absolute, if u know what I mean..im not bashing u so plz don't think I am..just trying 2 give constructive criticism..good luck in contest


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 19, 2008
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    A good write Well done and thank you for your entry x