Dark forest
Lost spirits wander there
Trapped for eternity
No way out they must wander alone here
No escape
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Comments
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A short, dark, grim piece. I liked it.
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Hey I like this a lot. Great a feeling in it...
It would be interesting to expand it and develop some of the images in it a bit further.
Nice work!
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so sad and emotional. they will find a way to get out. I hope
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