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Pale

You're washing me away
Bending down and beating me
Against the rocks

You can't shake me clean
I'm a dirty, dirty girl
My colors will run


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  • B Chandler
    March 20, 2008

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    It's like I understand it but at the same time have this veil of total confusion too. Nevertheless good luck in the contest and keep penning


  • Randomly Beautiful
    March 16, 2008

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    Interesting take. I like where you took the prompt. This made it to my list of finalists. Came very close. I am intrigued and headed to check out more of you soon.