Where are the splashes,
the pigments of love
that can make living brilliant?
Palled pain mocks this canvas
so bleak, devoid of
affection’s tender brushings and
my life is shaded, sadly grayed
in sorrow that stands
contrasted against the world.
Author notes
40 words/ picture prompt
Picture Credit: http://thetragictruth-of-me.deviantart.com/art/A-Distant-Figure-42014576
In a list
A contest entry
- Be Inspired [[Picture]] by PhantomsAngel87.
450 points, ended March 23, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful!!
Love Your weaving of words and though images sad to inhale, do bring forth Beauty to the page.
Powerful message...
Compliments the picture~
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Sharply stark this reaches deep within and I fear taking my eyes off the screen for losing sight of the beauty you have penned
♥
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Beautiful but sad poem
You did a fabulous job on your take on the picture. I truly enjoyed your personal art of writing poetry. Thank you for sharing with me and I wish you the very best in the contest.
Wishing you many blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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this has such a beautiful touch in your words aswell as a sadness as if the person is missing something. the words are powerful well done daddy
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Great imagery! Good luck.
Ken
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Nice interpretation of the picture! Your words are beautful and flow so well. Good luck in the contest!
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