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The "Egg" Dude ( a bunnys tale)

Twas a week before Easter and bunnies were mad,
cause the chickens were lazy and so very bad.
Not a feather had ruffled or egg had been laid,
nor a marshmallow treat or one choc~o~chick made.

Yet the baskets were ready, the grass had turned green,
but the chickens were steadfast, disturbed and quite mean.
So the bunnies devised a mischievous plan,
they would buy all their eggs from a dude in Japan.

So they hopped to the postal and sent a request,
they so patiently waited but soon got obsessed.
So they boarded an airplane and off they did fly,
and they laughed at the chickens while feeling quite spry.

When departing the plane they saw “him”, the egg dude,
so they offered “the barter”, a trade had ensued.
Having eggs in your basket is what it’s about,
so the bunnies are happy and that is no doubt.

Now the chickens are squawking but all in a coop,
on their way to Japan to be made into soup.



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  • who iam
    April 13, 2008

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    Well done!

    Nicely done.The words have a nice flow and reads easily.
    Good humor too.Not only for children but as an adult I enjoyed the read!


  • Pearl-1
    March 18, 2008

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    i read this to my sister gwen..we loved it..it reminds us when we were in the home we had easter hunts.. x


  • queen Moderators member
    March 16, 2008

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    So thats how the easter bunny gets the eggs I always thought there was an egg dude


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    March 16, 2008

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    Fifth Dove,

    What a delightful Easter offering, fun and so very creative! I'm wearing a smile on my face and am still chuckling.

    Niaish for sharing this light hearted tale.

    Gray Elk (dennis)


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 16, 2008

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    HEHE lol This is adorable They egg Dude lol The background is very cute too Dear, Love it all .


  • capricornpoet
    March 16, 2008

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    funny

    chicken soup , that was one funny tale....lovely whimsy and laughter....glad they weren't going to China..they would sell us the soup ...


  • gaze
    March 16, 2008

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    So very amusing!!!
    I was laughing out loud here. Cute and funny tale, with the most creative images.
    choc~o~chick made me giggle!

    You are a funny and full of imagination sweet Dove.


  • catz Moderators member
    March 16, 2008

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    Lol... this is funny, Sis... serves those chickens right, too. I bet in their next life they'll be a lot more cooperative

    A really ciute poem, Cindy


    "F Dee


  • BarefootSoul
    March 16, 2008

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    Oh this backround is stunning, soft and so darn darling. You must give me lessons!!! The poem is so funny, original and the way your wrote it its perfect! Very talented here gurl..hehe

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