For ages i've dreamed of you
With no real hope that you'd ever arrive
Until a mid december evening
You came into my hallowed world bearing infinite sunshine
Every part of you is perfect
From the curl of your hair
To the beauty of your smile
Your arms are my sanctuary
Beckoning me to come in closer and stay for a while
Your kisses are like lava
Setting this object in the center of my chest ablaze
Patiently i would wait for you anywhere
Until either you came first or the end of days
From dusk till dawn i smile
With love and joy stretced from ear to ear
My heart has never felt so much passion
And my eyes have not a drop of water to tear
Intimate time spent together is priceless
Its like we are in a universe all our own
Two planets colliding head on
With never again a possibility of standing alone
You are my rock
My confidant
My lover ,with a soul as pure as a dove
Davinci could not have painted anything more beautiful You are my masterpiece of love
I Love You....
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really enjoyed this poem. I thought it had great rhyme, and your use of imagery was splendid. I do not like that the line "You are my masterpiece of love", is on the right hand side of the page, while the rest of the poem is on the left. Then again, that is only my opinion. Keep writing!!


