Love,a gift from God
It makes unhappy people
Smile and feel comforted
Love connects the world together
Without it,the world would be a horrible place
But luckily,love is everywhere
Love makes friends
Love makes families
Love makes laughter
Love makes everything cheerful
You lose selfishness
If you have love
Your heart will be warm
If you have love
Love will give you things
That money can never buy
Love is something
Nothing can replace
It stops big fights
It gives you close friends
If some one doesnt have love
They can never ever be happy
They cant feel the satisfaction
Which we get when we talk
With our loved ones
The poorest of people
Will be happy
If they have love
Families stick together
Why?
Because of love
Hatred can give you nothing
But love can give you a warm heart
Love is the most important thing
In this whole wide world!
Author notes
Read this poem and dont think I'm just being good and saying others' words.This is true for me,love can make you more comfortable than the richest man
A contest entry
- Ages 12 AND UNDER: The Daily Gift by Sky Prince Ireland.
600 points, ended March 20, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please give me your honest opinion,I dont mind a hard comment
Comments
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Speechless!
A Gold trophy? Wow! You sure deserved it! Don't mind a hard comment? No need! No hard comments here. This was PERFECTION! Very nicely written from the heart with PURE PURE love! This was very creative. Thank you for this wonderful work! Please keep this up!
When the world says give up, hope whispers try one more time!
NEVER give up!
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Wow... This is soooooooooooooooooo nice, it's message is clear, Love is everything and hatred is nothing, keep writing!!!!!!
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awwwww, congrats on the gold trophy!!! you are totally right!!! love is very, very important!!! -slick99
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Nothing short of truthful. Spoken with wisdom, courage and great spirit. Thanks for entering.
Good luck.
Brian -
NIce poem!
Super poem!
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