Sparkling are the studs, that were neatly placed,
such sweet arousal, as passion drapes your face.
Nipples are nicely pierced, a tender spot for me,
run your tongue easily, over the one that’s free.
My fingers playing magically, while you tease.
I am now on my back, you’re upon your knees.
Tits I grab with both hands, your tongue plays.
Tighter I grab them, from left to right you sway.
My hands wander south, as you remain pleasing
my mound is nice & wet, from all that heated teasing.
Fingers pull my pink lips wide, while you watch
within another moment, hands stroke your crotch.
From my stud, you pull my nipple high to my lips,
I suck it nice and tenderly, my honey began to drip.
Scent of passion, now really gets you fricken horny,
you grabbed me up and spread me across your knee.
Several spankings on my ass yes a bit harder please.
Pussy is getting nice and wet, as you slid on in with ease.
His fingers played heatedly, not just one, two but three.
In and out they smoothly went, setting my juices free.
Up I got and to the bed I ran with passionate fire,
his groin is well beyond hard and ready, full of desire.
Laying me spread eagle, he hovered over me so fast
within a blink of an eye, he slapped my clit at last.
My fingers gently teased my clit, as he stroked his rod,
faster was the momentum; my nipples are hard as rocks.
In and out my fingers played, my eyes now locked on his,
he leans up with such power, cream dripping on his fist.
Legs propped up my mounds ready; I’m about to spill,
he gently slapped my clit, just to add a little fun.
When I moaned so loud, my pink muscles tightened up,
his mouth opens & I squirted hard, just to fill his cup.
Author notes
Well my ap husband Griswold made me this pic well and i loved it so I had to make something for it....and I have one that thinks nipple pegs would be funny..and well here I went lmao.
I love you Baby.
A contest entry
- The Erotic Challenge Season 6 by Master Ktulu.
450 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was hot yup. I liked the use of studs. That certainly was creative. I also thought the hardcore stance you took, worked extremely well here. It was different and hot. Welcome to the challenge ... *smiles*.
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ooops...forgot my applaud.
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Gee thanks... another fine mess you've gotten me into Ollie....lol This was a wonderful and very passionate write. Thank you for pointing it out. Awesome job!!!!
Gary
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I loved the idea of the piercings with this one..
I think you did a most amazing job with it..Simon says congrats on making it to the finalists round LOL
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Oh My Simon! Thank you..*waves to the crowd* I am in like total shock...the finalist rounds??OMG!! All I can say is watch out people, Passions is hot tonight!!
s thanks so much Master for the entertainment, but even more for the great comment it means alot to me.
Passions
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I'm afraid the use of the vulgarity put me off a tad ~shrug~ sorry!
The gist behind the write was rather interesting though, so congratulations and welcome
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I know that Tats and I am sorry, But I wanted something that would be stand outish
I will make it up to you soon I hope you'll forgive me this one time...
Passions
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This my sort of erotica. Sensual in places but extreme heated too. Ab-soul-tely love it! To bring piercings to the erotic forum is unusual but you have done it with style. The flow of the language made this very real. Grammar and spelling are spot on though there is the odd bit of punctuation missing not enough to detract from the poem though or spoil the read.
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this was very...........erotic and sensual, the imagary is amazing although a couple of the lines like kind of messed up the flow of the poem like
'scent of passion, now really gets you fricken horny,
you you grabbed me up and spread me across your knee"
i think its the amount of syllables or something that messes up the flow, but anyway, great job with this writ
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i loved this one!!!!!
you're an amazing writer!!!
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That was... a fuckin awesome testament to the fact that people do nothing as good as when they do it regarding sex... That was so vivid... and so fluent... I can do nothing but applaud and wish you a lifetime of fun with those studs <.<
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*passes out*
Describing one of my greatest pleasures here! To watch a guy pleasure himself... yikes... that was beyond hot!
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got dammit you got my legs crossed i bet griswold pulled it out and start erking Damn ! thanks for the wet ass Hon shit
Jewels
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See, I knew the title Queen of Seuction would fit you well and you have yet to disappoint. This is still not fair. Still can't doing anythin about these hormones.
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I suspect that your many fans will have to wait quite a time after reading this before they are able to comment!!!
A VERY warming poem!!!
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