For those who realise
that sucidial cliches
can be ripped from souls
they are the ones
who like onyx glimmer
hammer hearts
....cut oxygen
as unnecessary element.
In a minute theoritical existence
will cease...
psychological stillness
will float
as the shiny edge
slits larynx.
Decieved...
Thank you death!
Author notes
50 words jcat! love the pic...
A contest entry
- "Deception is sitting across the table from us" by carmel apple.
380 points, ended March 25, 2008, 13 entries
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hmm Words do fail me. Very good though.
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Lol. Gotta love that. Dark indeed.
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Well you definately went deep on this!! As the shiny edge slits larynx and cut oxygen as unnecessary element, both gorgeous lines!!! You took the picture in an incredible direction!! Well done and thank you for entering!!
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thanks a lot!!! I am a dark poetess..its not unusual that I wrote in such a manner!
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