I break and rhythmically-gently I sway,
These closing eyes hope for another day.
The taste of coffee in my lips
Reminds me of that hateful kiss.
But I gaze towards the sky,
And deep within, I sigh.
Another day, Another Day,
Rhythmically-gently I sway.
Another day, Another Day,
Rhythmically-gently I sway.
A pounding head engraves on my brain,
As flying subjects give me migraines.
The result of a complicated equation,
Involves the messy transformation,
Of nerve cells subjected to deforestation
Divided by an inexplicable deformation.
Another day, Another Day,
Rhythmically-gently I sway.
Another day, Another Day,
Rhythmically-gently I sway.
My eyelids hover around burning acid,
As falling tears are classified as passive.
I view a black withered rose
Lying behind a pinkish pose.
I assume this is what I chose
After all, one reaps what one sows.
Another day, Another Day,
Rhythmically-gently I sway.
Another day, Another Day,
Rhythmically-gently I sway.
Pink Floyd whispers in the Background,
To shy hearts that deny their own crown
Surprisingly, my heart quickens,
My God this is something wicked.
I question as my blood thickens,
And a tear thinks of what it misses.
I break and rhythmically-gently I sway,
These closing eyes hope for another day.
A contest entry
- A quick one for the best! by Peachy.
1800 points, ended July 6, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rhyme and Flow part 5 Love, romance or sensual - 50,000 points series by cricketjeff.
4000 points, ended July 16, 2008, 55 entries
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550 points, ended July 15, 2008, 31 entries
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What did you think
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Thank you for your entry in our contest with your beautiful song, but I'm afraid we are looking for poems with rhyme and flow and this does not fit the criteria.
Thanks again...Sue and Jeff
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Wow
This is definitly a piece that makes you think. I feel you've painted beautiful imagery.
Wonderful flow and rhyme. Thank you for your entry and good luck. -
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thanks for your comment!
I'm glad you like it.
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No problem
I liked it alot, Thank you.
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Interesting write ...
and nicely done. You have a typo though:
After all, one reaps what it sows. (one reaps what one sows)
can't be it, since you're speaking of a person.
Anyway, good job, all in all.
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Thanks! I corrected it,
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OMG I love it!!!!!
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