Cinnamon soil
laced with eternal love
coursing through it's veins
sprouting with pure garnet adoration
Author notes
15 words only
Picture Credit :
http://marielliott.deviantart.com/art/humble-gift-80039193
Was for Kari Kismet's contest, but I didn't enter quick enough....
A contest entry
- SHORT POEMS PART 2 by Blooming Poet.
700 points, ended March 23, 2008, 129 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique my work if you feel this needs improving
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Nice poem! Though it is not what i was looking for. It was short and seeet. Nicely written!
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I love the "cinnamon soil" it put some nice imagery in my mind and it also conjured up a very aromatic thingie ...a smell or olfactory reaction. I like it.
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"Cinnamon soil" is definitely unique! I love it. It makes a dirty thing taste good. Not literally, of course. Thank you for sharing this with the group.
animated
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The use of descrption words, like "Cinnamon soil" instead of just soil,or like "pure garnet adoration" really make this poem stunning and jaw dropping intead of a decent poem.
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A lovely prompt and wonderful piece to describe your picture.
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Say much for only 15 words - liked your interpretation of the picture served to inspire writers in this contest. A short poem it is, but a good one.
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this is wonderful cinnimon soil laced with eternal love sprouting with pure garnet adoration thank you for sharing this with the group
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when I first read this I wondered what the garnet was describing and then I looked at the pic and saw the carnation. Nice. It's hard to use only 15 words.
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