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From God’s bare earth a solitary flower grows,
fully dressed in vibrant bright beautiful clothes.
15 word prompt.
Picture Credit : http://marielliott.deviantart.com/art/humble-gift-80039193
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward 15 words by Kari.
600 points, ended March 15, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter your last posted poem by whispernthedark.
425 points, ended March 22, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so wonderful. I really loved the imagery and the picture went so perfectly with this. I loved how you described the flower as being dressed in "vibrant bright beautiful clothes". Well done.
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Great imagery, wonderful picture to inspire such a pretty poem. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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This is a beautiful poem.
It goes perfectly with the picture. It's perfect the length it is too. Everything that needs to be said is said in those two lines.
Good luck in the contest!
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What lovely lines
that do describe the picture so very well.
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Such beauty portrayed in these few words and so much said. Simply beautiful. All the best to you Bazza, and well done.
Shaz xx
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Well done mate! short, simple but very effective!
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Bazza, only you could write something so close in feeling to a haiku, and still do your trademark trick of cramming so many words into a line. I know that is a contradiction in terms. I simply love your "voice" - you and it are unique.
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This was very beautiful and amazing. You did such a great job with the picture and I wish u the best of luck
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