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Tending

Missing image
I removed loose topsoil
to extract bold beauty
reminiscent of flower
as petals swept body

Author notes

Picture Credit :
http://marielliott.deviantart.com/art/humble-gift-80039193

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    I lilked the last line..i thought it added

    a touch of feminine to the poem..like a newborn of a
    female a young seedling.
    Loved it! well written!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen very peaceful to read!


  • Tattboyspet
    March 17, 2008

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    the last line put me off a bit ... the first three ran together wonderfully and could've been interpreted as more than just the flower, but the last line threw me ... ~shrug~ sorry, but I'm usually painfully honest with my favourites


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    March 16, 2008

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    this is really beautiful mark, well done
    Tasha


  • Kari gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    You always do a great job and I thank you so much for your entry Best of luck in this contest here


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    March 15, 2008
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    Oh sheesh ... nice nice nice!

    Me likes!

  • Nighttime angel
    March 15, 2008

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    awwww this is such a beautiful poem that you written, cousin. I love this so much... WOW...

    good luck in the contest

    kat

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