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In shades

Missing image
In loving me
you'll embrace
both beauty and rain;


and yet


you hold me ~
                        Still...

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  • BellaD
    March 17, 2008

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    Beautiful poem!

    I love this succinct piece and the message of loving and being loved in good times and bad. Congrats on the Gold.

  • Nighttime angel
    March 15, 2008

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    Congratulations on the gold. great job. this is a beautiful poem, I love the last 3 lines..

    kat

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    March 15, 2008
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    Congratulations on the gold sweetie

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    March 15, 2008

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    Sigh, this is so beautiful, what a gorgeous, soft take on the prompt, well done and goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • BehindTheShadow
    March 15, 2008

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    Both beauty and rain...isn't that the god's honest truth when you get right down to it? Beautiful write and good luck in the contest.


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    intimacy is a loverly feeling. Beautiful approach to your choice of prompt!

    Steve


  • Kari gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    So very very true on what you just said there. This piece is very thought provoking. Wonderful. Best of luck

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