Rambling man, Rambling song
I tune you out, You turn me on
cloaked wings tightened
carnal yearnings heightened
Ramblimg man, Rambling song
I tune you out, You turn me on
Author notes
needs work
A contest entry
- another. by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This reminded me of how I am at the moment,
But yeah,thats another subject.
hehe.
Love the write.
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I enjoyed that. I like the tight structure and the repetition, and the way you managed to keep it so short and to the point. I always find it difficult to do that.
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Thank You. I have a habit of composing short poems. I am not sure why. I guess it's just my thing.
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