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a grief observed

You are
the reason
I'll always
be a circle

not in that
good, smart
C. S. Lewis
sort of way

picture a dog,
chasing its tail
and succeeding
only to find
far worse,
self-inflicted
smarting pain

I'm not smart
but I know
You said to me
"die to self"
but my self
loves me, too

I want You
I need You
and I wonder
will I always
be a circle
reaching for
Your circle
hurting my
self

wanting more








Author notes

1 Peter 2:24: "He himself bore our sins in his body on the tree, so that we might die to sins and live for righteousness; by his wounds you have been healed."

I don't know if I know how to do that.

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  • zillion
    March 19, 2008

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    I'm not sure I know how to either. Though the things I'm not sure about are plenty. Excellent work of poetry.


  • be a circle
    March 17, 2008
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    I just realized...
    sometimes all my poetry looks the same.