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Tarnished Body

                                                                                   

              Troubled by her subtle charming demeanor,
                He shakes her pure image from his heart.
              Replacing it with what he saw in his mind,
                He resists his desire engulfed in flames.
              Pushing himself to all the outer limits,
                He finds her now a lustful tarnished body,
                    For illusion on purity is best.

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This is what I saw when I read the propmt.

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  • KayJay
    March 21, 2008
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    Congratulations! Well deserved...
    Ken


  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    March 21, 2008

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    Grins

    and thats how everything is seen today.

    thanks for entering and i hope you continue to have great ideas in the future.


  • creationsfromheart
    March 17, 2008
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    this is very good entry
    thank you and good luck