So once upon a time ago
I met this little girl.
Little did I know
that she'd soon become my world.
Every day I'd go to see her
more excited than the last.
I loved to be around her,
we always had a blast.
She always accepted me,
unlike all the others.
She actually treated me like a person,
not like just a bother.
She introduced me to a world,
one I didn't know existed.
She became my very first friend,
and her intentions were never twisted.
She explained so much to me,
like how I'm a good person no matter what.
Now six years later
nothing could ever split us up.
So here's to you,
the most amazing girl I know.
I love you Tara,
and I hope that will always show.
A contest entry
- March New Members contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended April 8, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
This poem has give me warmth in my spirit. It is great to read about a beautiful friendship/sister as this poem does. Nicely written!
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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It's always refreshing to read about such close friendships. I can relate so much to it, especially the first 2-3 stanzas. In the first line, "ago" is unneeded, and you have also used some extra commas that may distract the reader. But this is a nice dedication. Good luck in the contest.
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Welcome to Allpoetry
Such a beautiful write about a wonderful friend. A trtue friend can influence our lives so much, as obviously your friend has. I hope you remain friends for always!
Thanks so much for sharing
gaylene
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Welcome to AllPoetry
What a delightful poem for your best friend, I think the only thing I don't understand is "She actually treated me like a person,
not like just a bother" since from what I can see you are a female?
Nonetheless, great write
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Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Yes, I am female.
And it's not supposed to say brother, if that's what you were thinking.
Like, I never bothered her? Or does it not make sense that way?
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Ah yes that makes sense, you just need to fix the spelling up on that then You wrote 'brother' instead of 'bother'
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