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Girl Go Play

Meander with me
for a minute together.
Walking in silence
broken by occasional thought
spoken through eyes
often as voice.

See no more a lady,
but a girl.
Happy with herself
unburdened by responsibility.
Suspense and wonder renewed.

 

 

Play.
There's no adults to judge.
Giggle.

I like to let me out.
Random soul
breaking free
exploring arts, nature and science.
Unlocking the self-built cage
where inside it's just me
asking you to spend time
with a girl.

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CONTEST:" Me time is the time that I spend for my self alone doing things that I like most"

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  • shortyjo
    July 11, 2008

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    oooh I like this one! Love the last stanza. Reminds me of the movie Notting Hill where he's like I'm just a boy, standing in front of a girl, asking you to love me. Or something like that, lol. Very very cool, like the way it's set out and the way it's you speaking your thoughts as they come, almost like you're outside looking in on yourself. (or something)


  • Purush
    March 15, 2008
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    wish you all the best

    okay
    it is quite explanatory
    i wish you all the best