...and so I yelled.
I screamed and I kicked at you
To you
It was just another fight
...and so I cursed
I swore and cried and
Hurled things at you
Ordered, demanded answers
To questions
You weren't supposed to understand
...and so you grew tired
Of me, of the way I had become
You asked, you pleaded with me
You begged me, you were gentle
But I just smiled and yelled back
...and so you left
And as I watched you leave,
My last protection,
My last hope,
I was happy
That lasted for a while.
...but now I'm lonely.
With love,
Heart
Author notes
Lol Katrina I bet you knew I would do this one ^-^ Sorry if you don't like it, it was kinda abstract and crazy and stuff and whatnot. Oh well. Hope you do.
Gah I hope this is appropriate for a 12 year old! *looks in a mirror and ponders*
Option 1-the lonely thing
A contest entry
- OPTIONS! 8 OF THEM!!! by liduen.
600 points, ended March 21, 2008, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Yeah, I knew you would do this...I mean, DUH! Don't worry, the only way i wouldn't be able to read it is if you put profanity or erotica in the catagories. I like this, don't worry. Its really good! Good luck in the contest.
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Yay you like! Do you mind if I enter again?
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of course not! read the rules
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Wow is this true? If so I'm very sorry.
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Nope, not true (fortunately, lol). I just wanted to try writing something from the perspective of a person who was facing a paradox somewhat like this. Something like...I'd love to see them leave but I hate to have them gone...And then twist it a little.
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Oh I see. Well silly me!
You certainly know how to write a sad poem whether it's true or not. What a gift you have! Anyway good luck in the contest.
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